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Lucia Birch
    June 20, 2009 at 12:13 PM
#16

Reflection.


As I walk through trees

I feel safe – enclosed

My reflections scatter like the

dappled drops of sunlight

Falling through leaves

Slanting past the blackbirds shuffle

the squirrels scuffle

Catching the chaffinch in mid-warble

And chasing the jay-birds noisily

Then nestling down on last years leaf mould.

Neat, soft, earthy scent

My reflections spread and spent

in quiet relaxation.


Lucia Birch

Roy Birch
    June 20, 2009 at 12:14 PM
#17

Reflection.


Reflections in the mirror

Reflections on the wall

Reflections can be very large

or very, very small


Than can even be invisible

If they live within the soul

-Reflections of the pieces

That combine to make us whole.


Roy Birch


Roger Drury
    June 20, 2009 at 12:16 PM
#18

Reflection.


On the wall opposite

A mark

Age 7

Pencil beside crayon scribble

Above

Carefully drawn fairy-like characters

Higher, stickers, posters, photographs

Across the ceiling lines of words

Poems, warnings, memories


We decorated,

But could not cover up

Your childhood


Roger Drury

Jan Hedger
    June 20, 2009 at 08:39 PM
#19

In the wake of reflection

 

The sun broke through the clouds, shining its light upon the puddles, left by the downpour of rain.  At one, a woman stood, looking down on her reflection.  It scared her, frightened her, and disturbed her; where had the girl gone?  Her innocence sullied and spoilt by him.

Shaking the droplets from her umbrella, she snapped it shut and stirred the water with its point, till it became muddy and unclear; as muddy and unclear as her mind felt at this present moment.

To the side of her, stood a greater body of water, a lake; calling her.

‘Come into me and allow yourself to sink to my silted depths.  Know life no more and free your mind from this burden you carry.  Cleanse yourself in me.’

The woman moved closer to the edge. A second beam of light, stronger than the first, shone with such brilliance, it bought forth a rainbow.

She faltered, hesitated and instead of stepping into the water, she climbed onto and rode the rainbow bringing colour back to her life.


Jan (GROW)

Janet Humphrey's
    June 21, 2009 at 10:43 AM
#20

As i look into the mirror at my reflection the change over the years has gone,
I've aged before knowing it,
Time has gone so fast i did not realize you see yourself young,
look again and age has caught up with you,
The mirror shadows another you.
Sally Flood
    June 22, 2009 at 09:22 AM
#21

ashley
can you change third line to

Where thoughts were optimistic
and sprung easy from the tongue.

see what you meant reading it back
love your first poem on reflections
 luv sally
                       
Ashley Jordan
    June 22, 2009 at 09:28 AM
#22

Hi Sally

The wording has been changed here and in the website gallery :-)

Lovely to see you on Saturday!

Cynthia Price
    June 28, 2009 at 10:11 PM
#23

                                            On    Reflection

 

Wandering through the garden in the early morn

Watching the fairy cobweb shawls rise into the air

I hear a thousand birds calling the sun to rise

And watch the flowers unfold to the awakening skies

 

        I reach the pond and for a moment stop and stare

Into the clear and passive water where

I am mirrored, but one small fly to drink alights

And my reflection, like my thoughts, shatters into light.

 

 Cynthia Price

  28/06/2009

Stevenage Survivors poetry

Marie Neumann
    June 29, 2009 at 03:32 PM
#24

Reflexion
 
We are trouts
jumping against
the stream,
toward the death,
toward the life.
I see you in me,
you see me in you.
We leap together,
we swim together
I am you,
you are me.

Marie Neumann
(GROW & POW)

Pat Smart
    June 30, 2009 at 09:46 AM
#25

The Sea of Life
  
Smooth, calm.
Love and happiness,
Peace and tranquillity.
Suddenly, for no reason,
a ripple appears!
Time to pay heed.
Smooth out any ripples now,
or soon the waves will rise
and smother your chances forever.
                          Pat Smart - June 98
Pecket Learning Community
(formerly Pecket Well College)


John Malcomson
    June 30, 2009 at 10:35 AM
#26

Reflection

John Malcomson

30 June 2009

I look in the mirror

My reflection looks at me

My head’s on top and so is his

His feet the same for me

I lift my head and so does he

I nod and

He nods right back

Just the same as me

 

But

My watch is on my right wrist

While on the left for he

I lift my arm and he lifts his

But the opposite of me

 

So what’s with this reflection then

How come I’m the same as he

At top and bottom only

While all the rest becomes

The opposite of me

Antony May
    June 30, 2009 at 02:44 PM
#27

‘IF…’

If you can recognize innocence
Where others see only design
If you can trust your inner voice
When all around you cast doubt
If you can accept purity
In spite of reason's fear...

Then you can learn to love Michael
Peter Pan WAS here...

If you can defend with calmness
Accepting hateful opinions
If you can persuade without judging
Close off your heart but not your ears
If you can share in happiness
Within a second of a tear...

Then you can learn to love Michael
Peter Pan WAS here...

If you sense a lost childhood
See a man-boy on a quest
If you believe in fairy tales
Yet for justice will not rest
If you can love unequivocally
Wanting nothing in return

Then you have learnt to love Michael
And you are not alone.

Antony May 29/6/09 (Based on the poem by Rudyard Kipling)

Nick Crump
    June 30, 2009 at 06:58 PM
#28

                       

                              Reflections
 
            reflect on light on a running stream ,
AS you watch, the water running by .
you reflect on the past and present times , gone by.
good bad this may be,
 
broken dreams, relationships,bereavement.
 
success to achieve , not reach your goals , to for fill your dreams,
 
reflection on happy , the positive . what you can achieve , make you happy ,
 
try not to dwell on the bad reflection .
 
nick crump     GROW


Sue Rabbett
    June 30, 2009 at 08:10 PM
#29

Reflections

Reflections. Mirror, Mirror on the wall.  When I look into the mirror, what do I see?

I see the real me, not the person with the mask I wear when I'm outside, meeting friends and family.

I see inside myself when I look in the mirror.  I see my soul, my heart, my blood pumping through my veins, warming me inside.  I see my organs working, my bones moving and my blood cells blending together to keep me healthy and alive.

I feel the hurts, pain, laughter and happiness when I go beyond my skin and I see my heart beating, keeping my mind alert, creative and alive.

When I stare into the mirror with my deep, blue eyes, I see myself as God made me.  My clear skin, my vision, my hands to feel, my ears to listen and my mouth to speak words of wisdom.

I look in the mirror and feel fortunate that I can see the real me, beyond what others see.  I feel the goodness in my soul, to share with others on my life's journey.  On that long road with ups and downs and twists and turns, I wait patiently for the light to illuminate my way.

Sue Rabbett (GROW)

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