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TheFED
    June 30, 2009 at 08:24 PM
#1

TheFED Writing Challenge
for July 2009 is: 

'The Hand of Hope' 

Writing can be in any form or style, poetry or prose. 

Please encourage the rest of your group to participate, especially those who do not have access to the Internet. 

You can submit your work by clicking on 'Reply' which can be found at both the top and bottom of this page.

Please say which writing group (if any)y
ou are a member of.

All submissions will be included in
TheFED Website Gallery

Jan Hedger
    July 01, 2009 at 12:10 PM
#2

Tranquillity

 

Oh dear sweet woodland


of pure tranquillity


Oh how I bathe in your ethereal beauty


Nature’s cathedral in majestic splendour,


Rising, aspiring,


and saluting the sky.


Let not it silence fool you,


nor its stillness belie


For if you pause a moment


upon your passing through


You’ll hear a choir of angel’s song


to freshen you anew.


All manner of creatures are there,


although hidden


They’ll bid you come! 


Come join in our congregation.


Do as they bid, my friend,


and linger a while longer


Your heart will be lifted,


your senses heightened,


Your resolve stronger.


Reach out; capture its essence


secrete it away in your mind


So when you feel bruised and battered,


By the injustice of mankind


Release it; and let the scene unfold


Allow it to breathe; it’s yours to behold.


Oh dear sweet woodland


of pure tranquillity


Oh how I bathe in your ethereal beauty.

  


Jan Hedger GROW

 


Jan Hedger
    July 01, 2009 at 12:16 PM
#3

There is no future, in the past.

Memories of the mind

Cannot be recreated

For nothing is the same twice.


Look to dreams of the future

For that is where destiny lies,

Not in that, which is left behind.

Turn the key, lock the door

Archive it.


White lace

 

I dreamt I saw an angel

Dressed in pure white lace

Her wings they did a flutter

As she beckoned from above

I wanted now to join her

To find freedom from the pain

But there was a hand that held me

From my man of forty year

I turned and met his tired eyes

And asked of him one last thing

My hand he then let slip away

You’ll always be my angel, my friend.


Jan Hedger (GROW)


Bruce Barnes
    July 03, 2009 at 12:38 PM
#4

The hand of hope

In either hand a palm, one small and sticky
with promise, tugging, the other broader,
its lifeline crosshatched with yours, but you 
never thought to walk this way alone.  


Bruce Barnes-friend of Fed
Lucia Birch
    July 06, 2009 at 08:31 PM
#5

   The Hand of Hope

(from a Vale House workshop Spring 2009)

The hand of hope reached out
across a land scarred
by decades of deadly enmity
its peoples ravaged, body and soul
divided by religion, politics, culture, colour
The war had raged for so long
people had forgotten there was any other way to be

But the hand of hope reached out - its palm
filled with tiny seeds
Long grass grew and swayed in the wind
among poppies, meadowsweet and memories

The hand of hope reached a little further
sowing peace within the heart of humankind
reminding us of love and forgiveness
of sun and rain
of rainbows and possibilities
of extending the hands of hope.

Lucia Birch
(Stevenage Survivors)



Josie Lawson
    July 09, 2009 at 10:13 AM
#6

LOST AND FOUND

(Angels of our time)

Peace, re-united souls

Through the archives of time and distress

Angel (named thirty six years on)

Sam laid to rest in a service of the heart and soul

Twins now respected, re-united together in the unseen world of time

Mother feels a sense of light burden being lifted

Understanding coming from a source that least was expected

Her twins are now joined...they did not survive

But the wonder of future medical science has made her wonder

But milk spilled cannot be mended, but the souls within the living unseen world can

Closure of the mind of concern for a lost child for so many years

Angel I believe at last is now joined like the conjoined twins of the real world

medically parted to help them live...

imagine the lost soul of Sam crying out for his lost twin he could not find for rest -

all their mother can do now is move on in the living world

Knowing after communication understood at last was given

Quite often, the truth of sensation of a mother against medical science should be heard

Then heartache would be respected in the real world.

The sensation of true light now lives

Safely impacted within the peaceful relaxing soul of mother

Unseen, unheard

Siblings not born but miscarried - respectfully joined within family that they should have been -

not lost now but surviving in the world of lost and found souls

Peace is now found, souls at long last laid to rest

©9.7.09 JOSIE LAWSON

All Rights Reserved (GROW)

SALLY FLOOD
    July 19, 2009 at 12:49 PM
#7

THE HAND OF HOPE

My pen in my hand
traces thoughts in my mind,
covers the page
and slowly unwind.

So many pages
are covered like this,
time that is mine
moments of bliss.

I let my hand wander
free as a bird,
hoping that somewhere
my words will be heard.

Like a violin that strums
music is wrought,
the rhythm of words
magic is caught.

This is the hand
that scribbles alone,
wrapped now in silence
a web of my own.

this is the second time i sent this poem, but it doesn't appear to be on message board, luv sally

Ashley
    July 19, 2009 at 10:23 PM
#8

Hi Sally,

This is the first time it has gone through.  I've put it up in the website gallery now.  Thanks for submitting :-)
PaulEvans
    July 20, 2009 at 08:12 PM
#9

Paul Evans
(Stevenage Survivors)

Hand of Hope

 

In a Heavenly realm

where servants toil and

peace ascends while smiles

blends and willow bends

 

 

The Hand of hope floats

like candles lit by breezes

floating on pillows in clouds

of Vapor and sea creatures

 

Where skies and lands are

harvesters of loving plans

and natures environment

is at ease to suit are needs

 

So the Hand of Hope nurtures

our fragile balance in

creative elements to meet

a beautiful, loving, desirable

Home land

Jan Humphreys
    July 21, 2009 at 01:14 PM
#10

My hands are available to give out as much help as I can to others.  I hope that the things I try to do will make them realise that there are people, not many, who will do their best to give comfort and understanding.  So many are not able to accept help from other people.  Myself, I feel joy to think I have done something worthwhile and it certainly cleanses the mixed-up emotions in my head.  It is like a de-clutter.

I have a dear friend who runs her own business.  She is finding everything getting too much for her.  She has had scaffolding around her home and months of dirt and dust.  The scaffolding is down now, so I went round and we got down to lots of cleansing. 

When we finished, she said to me "I feel so much lighter, mentally.  I am seeing the light at the end of the tunnel.  Our hands of hope are nearly achieved.

Jan Humphreys (GROW)


Ashley Jordan
    July 21, 2009 at 01:28 PM
#11

The Hand of Hope

The hand of hope catches all the circumstances thrown at it and holds them steady before a contemplative gaze.

The hand of hope rests gently in the lap of acceptance.  It does not squeeze or clench in anger.  It remains open and relaxed.

The hand of hope is always ready to greet the new,
the old, the changed and the familiar.

The hand of hope does not try to hold on to others. It sits with them, until they are ready to move on.  When that time comes, it acknowledges the lessons and blessings that they have brought.
It lifts them up, releases them and then it waves them goodbye.

The hand of hope is the hand of a mother...
Ashley Jordan
    July 21, 2009 at 01:33 PM
#12

The Hand of Hope

A hand that is extended in friendship is a hand of hope.  It aspires to both help and be helped.  It is ready to guide and to be led.  It holds the door open between two traveling souls and it carries with it the gift of time.

Time to learn and grow together, time to enjoy the rewards that friendship brings and time to reflect upon the journey.


Ashley Jordan (GROW)


Jan Hedger
    July 31, 2009 at 07:34 PM
#13

Hand of Hope

 If you are burdened by the load you are carrying on your shoulders

 With the weight of your own problems and the worries of others

Throw them back, stand tall and let the burden slip to the floor.

If your feet are as heavy as lead and your footsteps laboured

With every aching step you take on life’s rocky and uncertain road

Stride out and find a smoother path to follow, cushioned by sweet grass.

If the fear twists like a snake in the pit of your stomach, and the bile rises to

Leave a bitter taste in your mouth and is swallowed along with your pride

Breathe deep and let the fragrant perfume of life flow through your veins and restore your self belief.

If you feel problems and despair are trapped within the cage of your head

And no-one is willing to open the door to allow them to be shared

Commit them to paper and let the pen become your friend.

If you can hold hope in your hand, grasp it, cherish it, and believe in it,

Then share that hope with those less fortunate, then hope will blossom into reality and be yours.

 

Jan Hedger GROW

 

 

 

 

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